pridex2

Alright, lets get this goin...

The first thing that I notice is that your lines are getting better. They are not sloppy and unfinished. Your are also, probably without even noticing, using line wieghts to help differentiate what's in the foreground and whats in the back. This is something that adds tons to the finished look of a page. For panel 2, I'd make the lines around his hands a lot thicker... That'd make them look really cool, and add a sense of depth them them... I'd do it on the fingers of panel 5 as well. One thing tho, work out a better way to detail your spot blacks. ( I meant to tell you this about your Christian Bale pic as well) Look at the way Joe details his blacks. He puts little razor sharp lines on the ends of them. Not saying that you have to do that, but find some way. It would make it look more finished and polished.

Overall, I'd give this C-, with a B+ to an A meaning that your ready. You still have a few things to work out with your human anatomy, but you are planning on taking classes. I'd look into taking some classes at your local community college. Sometimes they offer single art classes.

well that's it.. keep up the good work:}